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Ladyhawke
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since 2001-09-01
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0 posted 2002-01-21 06:16 PM



I visit and watch
And listen and see.
Outside this window
I observe silently.

The night unfolds
Majestically.
From far beneath
I observe silently.

I see what others
Don't think I see.
I cannot do else;
I observe silently.

Hundreds of words
In poignant plea.
Though I would shout,
I observe silently.

Love is not wasted
When blessing me.
I reach, I grasp.
I observe silently.

© Copyright 2002 Ladyhawke - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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1 posted 2002-01-21 06:22 PM


Very nicely done,
Sometimes I guess silence is all we have to give.

Gloom

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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2 posted 2002-01-21 06:30 PM


WOW!!!Wonderful observation. This poem is very well written with interesting messages woven throughout. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

J. K. Mitchell
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since 2002-01-12
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3 posted 2002-01-21 07:06 PM


Looking at the world through silence is something I can relate to.

Good write!

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2002-01-21 07:48 PM


felt every word of this.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-01-21 09:04 PM




(smiles) Sooooooo wonderfully expressed, sweet friend, sometimes when we think to ourselves and listen to our hearts in serenity, we will find great peace-of-mind and joy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ladyhawke, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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