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The Dream
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The Dream |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
I awake at dawn With a thin crack of light Sneaking through the shades The light hits your still sleeping face You breathe shallow, look peaceful I can smell your aroma That I am so familiar with Your cold little feet Stuck between my legs My hand cupped on the rise of your hip I can feel you without touching The sound of your breathing Sweet music to my ears The old ratty T-shirt Clinging to your body Making me jealous For coming between us At last you stir Opening your beautiful eyes You reach to kiss me Then I realize you're not there And I cry…again Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod [This message has been edited by Rodney Belcher (01-22-2002 09:51 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Rod! You just about ripped my heart out of my chest with this one! Talk about heart-wrenching!! Fantastic ending...but sad. ~Hugs across the border, Nancy~  ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Rodney, this si so so sad, my heart goes out to you and pray that soon you will find her before your very eyes and will cry in joy and not in sorrow! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, our hearts go out to you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rodney, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
I smiled as I read your beginning lines but your last few words created a dramatic effect. Memories stir a lot of emotions your showed that with your words. Excellent! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my gosh...I was melting to this poem and then I woke up and cried. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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