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walker
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0 posted 2002-01-21 01:42 PM



I opened the door
and there you were
sitting looking
straight at me
You could not find
my eyes
they had wondered off
I had warned you
but you failed to listen
Now you search in vain
love ends
when it has to end

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1 posted 2002-01-21 01:49 PM




(big hugggsssssss) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart cries out to all those lovers who fell in love only to realize that this love couldn't last, and wish them all for the greatest happiness to follow! (kiss on cheek) You always express love so well, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-21 02:31 PM


Walker, you must be experiencing some heart-breaking times. Two good writes along the same line. Very good yet sad too. Cheryl
Duncan
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3 posted 2002-01-21 02:33 PM


You could not find
my eyes
they had wondered off
I had warned you
but you failed to listen
Now you search in vain

And it takes what it takes to 'see' what we have lost.  

nichole2005
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4 posted 2002-01-21 02:46 PM


Wow you sound like you are going through some pretty tough times. I can relate to that though. I have been through some pretty tough times lately. I am sorry!

  

bslicker
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5 posted 2002-01-21 03:00 PM


been there, done that, am there right now.
Good write.


bernie

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Bernie Slicker

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-01-21 03:18 PM


Yes...James
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7 posted 2002-01-21 04:18 PM


A sad moment for the eyes that wondered off
and those left wondering....Sometimes the
moment is not seized...Surely a better one
awaits...only to be seen..

Irish Rose
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8 posted 2002-01-21 04:21 PM


someone who loves me said "I don't know how I would ever stop this"

I often wondered why some love ends and other love doesn't.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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