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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2002-01-21 08:32 AM

The Very Same

I’ve lived a life of misty morn
With colored skies and butterflies
With crystal due that washed new born
That sang to me in lullabies.

I’ve walked among the daffodil
And played within the valley’s green
I’ve idled nostrils winter shrill
And savored all of winters scene.

I looked across the great divide
And saw the vultures soar on high
Watched the mountains brake and slide.
And heard the winds of time go by.

I’ve sipped the cup of ecstasy
And wore the crown of every day
I’ve tasted love and fantasy
And everything that came my way.

All within the misty dawn
The very same where I was born.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

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Canada

1 posted 2002-01-21 08:37 AM

Okay...I am keeping this one. I flowed with delight through the whole of it and then wanted more...This poem is absolutely magnificent. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-01-21 08:51 AM

Startime,
Thank you sweet.

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2002-01-21 08:56 AM

Oh, Seymour, this is my kind of poem!
It's as if you were inside my brain. There's loads of room
up there these days

I love this!!!!!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-01-21 08:57 AM

Kathleen,
And another

for you.

strbbux
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Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-01-21 09:01 AM

Seymour, siiiiigh,,such a beautiful heartfelt poem, of the beauty of this wonderful earth. And my favorite lines
"I’ve sipped the cup of ecstasy
And wore the crown of every day" how very creative. floria

Charisma

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lost in blue pages

6 posted 2002-01-21 09:06 AM

*as always a delight to read Sey, just love it

Charisma

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2002-01-21 09:21 AM

I've lived a life of misty morn
With colored skies and butterflies
With crystal due that washed new born
That sang to me in lullabies.
===================================
I've idled nostrils winter shrill
And savored all of winters scene.
===================================
Watched the mountains brake and slide.
And heard the winds of time go by.

I've sipped the cup of ecstasy
And wore the crown of every day
=====================================
All within the misty dawn
The very same where I was born.
=====================================

Ahh me sweet Stinky...you take us to Eden in rhyme this morn...
I cant imagine not having your wisdoms verse to start my "misty morn"
You are the raspberry in my morning cup of tea

the cadence I butter me bagel with *L*
this is lovely Sy-babes.

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

8 posted 2002-01-21 09:28 AM

Enjoyed this one
excellent writing Seymour

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2002-01-21 01:31 PM

Floria,
Thank you love.

Charisma,
Glad you enjoyed. *L*

JM,
I buttered your bagel and you sweetened my tea. I guess we had breakfast together this morning.

WW S

Rex,
Glad you enjoyed.

DarkAngelChelle
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since 2001-12-06

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Kansas

10 posted 2002-01-22 12:23 PM

Seymour,

Such powerful visionary (or is it visual? maybe both

) impact! I could see such vivid images in my mind. Everything about this is just so wonderfully clear, almost tangible. Thanks for the read!

~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

11 posted 2002-01-22 07:06 AM

I do enjoy ALL of this...but the play on words here...

quote:
Watched the mountains brake and slide.
And heard the winds of time go by.

made me giggle...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2002-01-22 08:02 AM

DarkAngel,

*L*

Sunshine,
I made the sun giggle.

*L*

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

13 posted 2002-01-22 09:02 AM

If I reply can i have a kiss too haa...

~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

14 posted 2002-01-23 07:32 AM

All within the misty dawn
The very same where I was born.

A glorious day through the eyes of sky songs.

Sincerely,
Regina

Kit McCallum

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15 posted 2002-01-23 07:36 AM

Ah Seymour ... a beautifully flowing lullibye of words to greet this misty morn. Excellent phrasing and visuals throughout, much enjoyed these tender sentiments and the pictures they brought to my mind.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

16 posted 2002-01-23 08:07 AM

Victoria,
You can have two

Rwood,
Thank you and one for you two.

Kit,
I thank you sweet. *L*

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