Creating Eternal Friendship In Love

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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-01-20 10:45 PM

Quote: "If you have friendship in love then you have a relationship."
I think I just invented a loving relationship in a poem.

I want to create in your arms
The warmth within your heart
To flow into the universe
Of stars of loving emotions
Lets cuddle in your arms
And create the words
To fly together on a plain
So high that we can share the sky
As lovers naked to the wind
Letting our emotions go free
To explore our garden together
Let us join hand in hand
On our trail of love
Enjoying the serenity of two being one
Let us cleanse our spirit of any doubt
Of our devotion of friendship
That wraps us up together in trust
Singing our song within natures realm
We shall share sunrises and sunsets
Within each other’s mind
Till death do us part
Until darkness will bring us both
Into heavens gate
Hand in hand

<<<>>>
And if by chance one goes on the final trail
Before the other can walk it
They can wait before the gates
In the hand of love
And then enter as one

D.Lester Young (01/20/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-20 11:17 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...I love it, sweet friend, this is soooooooo beautiful! (big hugggssssss) May we all find friendship in the love for another and cherish the beauty and joy of it and create eternal happiness with this love to last forever! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words are a true relationship to the love of your heart and your spirit that shines always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lester, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-01-20 11:21 PM

*sigh* this is so very beautiful....I just love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

3 posted 2002-01-21 12:07 PM

SUPERB POEM!!!! An almost mystical, mythical
feel to this. Every word a piece of the whole. Loved this poem~~~~ ***Ivy Rose

poetryinmotion
Member

since 2002-01-14

Posts 61
mass

4 posted 2002-01-21 12:54 PM

oh D. this is such a beautiful poem you wrote. you must have a wonderful heart. it shows in this poem. great job. love Alice

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-01-21 02:19 PM

This is wonderful and magical, and flows as love should....easily.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2002-01-22 09:40 PM

Both love and friendship is the concrete
that pours, and forms the foundation
that love is built upon. We should all
be so lucky to become cement mixers.

I really liked what you wrote.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2002-01-23 01:15 AM

D.Lester Young - yes, I believe you have. Great write...

BC

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