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Chocolate |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Sweet ectasy when you touch my lips And glide over my tongue I moan in sheer delight When you are not here I long for more of you I want you Knowing how bad you are for me But I throw caution to the wind Because I must have you I can not give you up |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
We all have our vices, and chocolate is tempting to be sure, but I have to wonder if that is really what you're writing about. Nevertheless, this was a sweet treat. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wow, this one aches of want and the need to fulfill that urge. Very nicely done!! Welcome to Passions!!  All writing comes |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I always love the beautiful words you write! (sigh) May you forever share true happiness with the love of your life! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sweet and gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet J.K, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-20-2002 10:31 PM).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
ohhhhh my goodness..I am going to kill you..hehehhee you just made me get a huge craving for a twix! I'll settle for a snickers, can you please bring me one? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very tasty write! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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