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HEG
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since 2002-01-18
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0 posted 2002-01-20 07:55 PM


As I sit at my kitchen table watching
birds galore at the feeders in my backyard,
I observe social tolerance in action,
with dozens of sparrows
interdispersed with doves, blackbirds, cardinals, a woodpecker,
and a squirrel or two  --
all calmly feasting
in a friendly gathering of prey.

Suddenly, as if by magic,
every bird disappears,
seeking cover hidden
deep within the cedars and thorny bushes.
A shadow drifts across the yard,
signaling the arrival of a young hawk,
seeking a noontime meal.
The hawk swoops down,
landing upon the fence, and
surveys the now deserted yard,
silently enduring the cacophony
of protesting calls emanating  from his hidden prey.

I am struck by the lonely life
lived by a predator,
be it a bird of prey as here,
or tiger, shark, snake, or grizzly bear.
Whether herds of zebra and gazelles on the African plains
upon sighting a pride of lions, or
flocks of birds in suburban Louisiana
spying a solitary hawk,
the presence of a predator
disrupts all harmony and goodwill.
All prey fear and ostracize him.

There is no flock, no school, no herd
of other animals that welcomes his presence.
He is Nature’s social misfit,
keeping alone or tolerated only
by small packs of killer peers.
His is a harsh and brutal existence
predicated upon exploitation
of the weakness or gentleness of others.
None other desires the company
of those predatory in nature ---
a lesson best learned and remembered
by each and every Man!

© Copyright 2002 HEG - All Rights Reserved
ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
1 posted 2002-01-20 08:13 PM


Woeful state for those that preyed on the weak, then they were in turn preyed upon by others. Man has no other enemies but himself.
Nicely narrated..this piece could also be put into prose


serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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2 posted 2002-01-20 08:20 PM


I am delighted with this piece! Native of southern La., my backyard is a bird sanctuary, and I have witnessed this, that you describe so eloquently. Even the crows show deference to the Hawk! Wonderful my friend...now, where are you from?
HEG
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since 2002-01-18
Posts 42

3 posted 2002-01-20 08:30 PM


Dear ecrivan and serenity ~

  Thank you both for your comments.

Serenity, to answer your quesion, I live in Shreveport, La (northern La for anyone not  sure where S'port is)-- also I have a son and his family living in Belle Chasse (outside of N.O.).

Regards,
  Harry

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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4 posted 2002-01-20 08:47 PM


Harry, nice to meet you! I can throw a stone and hit Belle Chasse. (Well, with a sling shot anyway...) Great trout fishing, and the redfish run generous there too...delighted welcome you to Passions!
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