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Tim
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0 posted 2002-01-20 06:57 PM


Mongoose me in the asp,
safari I can tell,
he must have liked my ocelot,
I sure liked his gazelle.

I said we otter have some fun,
as to his bison clung,
upon his lips did platypus,
then gibbon him some tongue.

Gnu and I, we both should lynx,
lemming tell you why,
because my deer, I caribou,
ermine until I die.

He said he couldn't antelope,
his father had the gar,
I was left to porcupine,
to fish upon a star.

The bandicoot, he left me bear,
chincilla was his sin,
I dingo'd on his armadillo,
Cheetah's never win.

[This message has been edited by Tim (01-20-2002 07:01 PM).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2002-01-20 07:46 PM


LOL~
YOU are slightly demented ...
and I LOVE IT~
LOL~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Magnus
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2 posted 2002-01-20 07:54 PM


Tim...btw..my son's name is Tim...

I enjoyed this crafty work of art...Lots of
thought went into this..nicely done..

ecrivan
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3 posted 2002-01-20 07:55 PM




Woohah,



not mad at all, animal names into verse
genial,





[This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-20-2002 08:07 PM).]

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2002-01-20 08:08 PM


MONGOOSE ME IN THE ASP? If you were trying to get my attention? IT WORKED....a devilishly fun safari of punnery! You KNOW I liked! You are a trophy, yerself!
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