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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-01-20 05:22 PM


As the sun begins to set
Like a jewel in the crown
We'll admire nature's beauty
As the sun sinks slowly down

The seabirds fly above us
Gliding effortlessly in place
How we marvel at their beauty
So much majesty and grace

Our ship of love sets sail
Underneath the golden sky
How tranquil is this setting
As we begin to drift on by

We'll snuggle up together
Close together by the mast
As we move closer to the sunset
Our dreams will soon be cast

So much love there is to be made
In this warming amber glow
As our ship moves across still waters
Where it takes us - heaven knows

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2002-01-20 05:30 PM


This made me think of how wonderful a cruise would be...
and I plan one someday.  Enjoyed this, Sue

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Mac Attack
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2 posted 2002-01-20 06:05 PM


Simply warm and lovely.  I enjoyed the view, thanks!

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-01-20 06:48 PM


I enjoyed this Suetang...James
Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2002-01-20 10:31 PM


Romantic and lovely, Sue.  Enjoyed as always.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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5 posted 2002-01-20 10:35 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you ship of love forever rock softly on waters of eternity and take you to heavenly paradise! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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6 posted 2002-01-20 11:02 PM


*sigh* Sue..this vision is absolutely stunning. It is romance at its very best. I love it...I love it...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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7 posted 2002-01-21 03:08 PM


I must agree...this is a beautifully flowing
and romantic poem...As I said...I do enjoy
romance at sea or on seashore...And you have
done this well...Excellent writing Sue..

Victoria
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8 posted 2002-01-21 03:11 PM


When in love who cares ..its not where you are its who you are with

               ~Vic

                  

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

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