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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-01-20 05:14 PM


Our jeans are rolled up to our knees
As we walk along the shore
You retrieve a piece of driftwood
Washed up from the night before

Many treasures of the ocean
Will arrive on the incoming tide
At the edge of this beautiful ocean
Is where you and I often reside

We come here for the serenity
A place where we declare our love
As we both marvel at nature's beauty
We watch the seagulls fly high above

Most of all we're drawn to the water
As we immerse ourselves in blue
In this place we escape the rat race
And all our troubles fade from view

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Victoria
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1 posted 2002-01-20 05:25 PM


Everyone must have a lovely place to go to escape the stresses of life..lovely Sue..hugs

                ~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

Silver Streak
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2 posted 2002-01-20 05:27 PM


Love it!

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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3 posted 2002-01-20 07:52 PM


Sue...I am a sucker for seaside walks, romance, etc...So...needless to say..I
did enjoy this poem...well done...

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4 posted 2002-01-20 10:01 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) It make sme so happy to see you've found a place to relax and find peace and happiness with true love, may you forever share this paradise with the one you love! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is so gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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