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Open Poetry #18

Moment Of Begin

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-01-20 04:15 PM

Moment Of Begin

lost within
the roads you roam
you found a place
in my heart, a home
and I greet you
with arms tender
this shall be
your last surrender
gone are your nights and days
of silence void
we are words
in rhyme enjoyed
I anoint you
myself I pour
the moment of begin
with so much more

"I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow)

Morcastlin
Member

since 2002-01-14

Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA

1 posted 2002-01-20 04:20 PM

Very nice! This had a lovely quick-paced flow that just leads one on further into the poem. Very nice indeed!

Lve,
Bonne

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-01-20 04:29 PM

Beautifully composed and crafted thoughts.
Well done ...

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2002-01-20 05:21 PM

enjoy

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2002-01-20 06:56 PM

helen - treasures of thoughts, most beautiful...

BC

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2002-01-20 10:19 PM

Wow, Helen. Utterly beautiful!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-01-20 11:01 PM

(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may this magical moment forever repeat itself and make you fall in love all over again everyday forever! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2002-01-20 11:04 PM

this shall be
your last surrender

BRAVO!!!And I bet he has surrendered most happily...this is beautiful..and filled with a grace only you can give it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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