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Tiny Bubbles |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Tiny Bubbles The air is filled with fragrance sweet as bubbles fill the tub A sigh released tells of this treat to soft skin they will rub Giggles of delight fill the air when big splashes are heard A quick gasp to make me aware and wonder what’s occurred An open door brings forth a smile that turns into a laugh I stand there watching for awhile Fred in his bubble bath He’s built himself a battle ship with bath toys holding fast Around the tub he makes them zip with toilet paper mast His face is lit with such delight with soap upon his nose Little grandson you’re such a sight when tiny bubbles blows Karen Torbiak 2002 Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (giggles) Soooooooo cute, sweet friend, your words are always such a delight to read! (smiles) I hope Fred had the time of his life in that bubble bath; I love taking them so much too, they are so warm and refreshing! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Karen!!! This is just adorable and what a change from the romantic writing we are so used to from you! Aren't they just adorable in the tub? I love this....and I am keeping it! Ha! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mac Attack Member
since 2001-12-12
Posts 100Ontario, Canada |
I love this! Well done. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Simply delightful, Karen. I love it! -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Karen how I loved this, My little grandchild emptied the entire bottle of bubble bath into the tub...bubbles all over. LOl this was great , floria |
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SavedbyGrace Junior Member
since 2002-01-16
Posts 36MA |
What a wonderful word picture you've painted here! Thanks for posting it. Traci  "For by grace are ye saved through faith; and that not of yourselves: it is the gift of God: not of works, lest any man should boast." |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
The title made me think of the Don Ho song. But the poem brings much prettier pictures. I confess that I still love a bubble bath, I think it’s something we never outgrow. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
what a cute sight you painted for us, it makes me smile too. thank you for sharing Charisma |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You first made me think a sensual bath with a sexy man was on the way. LOL What a twist. I have lots of pics and even some videos of the little ones playing in the tub. Too cute. Sandra |
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