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Moon Pull
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Moon Pull |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Moon Pull every moment of my wake I feel the tug of you in ache a splashing so much like the tide waves hit strong then subside I am the heat of burning sand in need of cool when water caresses land romantic dance of tide and moon a gentle taste from lover's spoon salt from lips now taste sweet a lunar cycle now complete passions grow beneath moon full and yes I feel your pull "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (01-20-2002 02:18 PM).] |
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Mac Attack Member
since 2001-12-12
Posts 100Ontario, Canada |
 Cool! I like it. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always write such beautiful romantic words! (sigh) May the tides of passion forever wave in your heart and fill you with great joy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
cool stuff, since I personified the phases of the moon in a posting today I wanted to click in and just say you write some stunning stuff  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Stunning...this is absolutely stunning. Your poems have such a sensual quality to them...he is a lucky man who draws forth such feelings as these. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Wonderful! I love it! -Silver Streak Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Helen. You do this so very very well. I can almost smell the sea air...very gentle smile |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - your writings get better and better, and also only the way you write of romance... BC |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wonderful poem. I’ve felt this myself, but never been able to express it properly, I think you have done so here. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
A wonderful feeling isnt it? Very Lovely.. ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ 'romantic dance of tide and moon a gentle taste from lover's spoon' Delicately lovely ...~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
passions grow beneath moon full and yes I feel your pull ...always..I feel that pull very nice, Helen Maureen |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I could swear I had read this. If I didn't..I am now..and I'm saying now that it is awesome...and powerful. Maybe I'm just a sucker for Moon poetry, eh? LOL! Lovely, Lady! |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
felt this lots. I like the poem. Robert |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Waves of images!!! Nice! I like it. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
A beautiful image painted with this one.Enjoyed it! |
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