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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-01-20 01:10 PM


“MY FRIEND’S DATE”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I sit in this ole chair, just wondering,
about many of those romantic ones…
Thought I’d take a little break,
do some other, poetic expressions…

A little lighter side I would show,
different words from BC, that’s me…
Started writing something unexpected,
and then the phone rang, abruptly…

It was my close friend, from Alabama,
lost in them thar hills, with a cell phone…
With all those hill folk around him,
he was just feeling, mighty alone…

Asked him, ‘What in the world you doing’,
his reply was, “Dating Mary Lynn Bob…
Took her out in the deepest woods,
for she’s my only real heartthrob…”

Now if I told the whole story right now,
it would be all over too quick, actually…
So if you’d please come back, another time,
I’ll have the next episode from BC, yours truly…
~~~~



© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2002-01-20 01:13 PM


I like this, enjoyed it very much.  Good to read
a story from the memories of another.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Startime
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2 posted 2002-01-20 01:13 PM


*giggling* I think I am going to enjoy this little episode from BC...Well done. You easily captured my attention. **big hugs** can't wait to see what happens next.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-01-20 01:14 PM




(smiles) Oooohhhhh...I can't wait to find out what happens, you always write the most beautiful words that make me smile! (big hugggssssss) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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4 posted 2002-01-20 01:58 PM


BC you have left me hanging here, I will look forward to the rest of this mysterious story. floria
Mac Attack
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5 posted 2002-01-20 02:03 PM


HEY!  Just when you got me hooked!  What happens next????


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-01-20 02:17 PM


Aw Come on Bill !  Here we are sittin' holdin' our breath not knowin' what happened....please tell!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Magnus
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7 posted 2002-01-20 02:22 PM


Bill...you are playing with a full deck...
but you just pulled an ace out of your
sleeve...you are cheating us out of the
story....Now get that pen flowing...

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