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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-01-20 12:36 PM


In the still of the morning light
two lovers seek a tender bite.
As words of love echo in mind
and passions flame they then find.

The waiting of the moment shared
The thoughts of two they only dared.
A gift of love felt very strong.
from one to other all night long.

A quest of hope, moment of peace
A soulful sigh of deep release.
The hearts of love, the moon so bright.
The lust of two entwined in light.

The little touch, the heartfelt skip.
The moments of the wine they sip.
The softest hair covering head.
As both do lie on passion’s bed..

The stars burn bright to guide the night
as hearts taste an evening delight.
Till once again the fires do burn.
Restful sleep will come take it’s turn.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (01-20-2002 12:43 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-20 12:40 PM


Magnus,
When I finished the read I felt like I had disturbed you. LOL Enjoyed

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2 posted 2002-01-20 12:44 PM




(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, the flame of passion burns brightly in your words and creates spells of true love! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, like always your words of romance touch all our hearts! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-01-20 01:01 PM


enjoy
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4 posted 2002-01-20 02:07 PM


"The little touch, the heartfelt skip.
The moments of the wine they sip.
The softest hair covering head.
As both do lie on passion’s bed.."
Absolutely beautiful sentiment and writing. floria

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5 posted 2002-01-20 02:14 PM


Enjoyed this Magnus...James
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6 posted 2002-01-20 02:23 PM


Barry.....Barry....Barry....sorry, I seem to have lost my train of thought....back in the bed...lol...great write!  
*And it ends much better than my 'Her presence...'  on page two I believe*
Hugs, Nancy!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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7 posted 2002-01-20 02:29 PM


Magnus--There is nothing quite so sweet to begin the day with, or end it for that matter.  Much enjoyed your poem!
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