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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-01-20 12:33 PM



Newborns look for their familiar mothers' breasts
where they can be nurtured and their heads can safely rest;
the artist grows to choose his expressive mode,
external conditions he selects, and grows in his abode.

I live in a world of governing bodies I do deplore
but if I choose the comfort through purchases made at stores,
I can skillfully select my means and my support
and leave myself open to surrounding acceptance or retort.

Welcome the new and away with the old discarded truths
life, a game with a well shuffled deck and right cards suits,
goes on to fresher plains to write and express
and deals with issues that nurture and distress.




[This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-20-2002 09:26 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
Mac Attack
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1 posted 2002-01-20 12:52 PM


Hi Martin, interesting piece although it sounds suspiciously like a farewell....

ecrivan
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2 posted 2002-01-20 09:29 AM


Good observation,this came out of the resolution to go to other websites that would be emoticon friendly, after the change in the old 'house'


Mac Attack
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3 posted 2002-01-20 02:06 PM


Well, I for one, am glad you left a trail of breadcrumbs here for me to find!  LOL.
Well done.

Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-01-20 08:12 PM


And I am glad to see you here, as well...Martin.  I remember this poem and have always liked it because it speaks volumes.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

ecrivan
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5 posted 2002-01-20 08:19 PM


Thanks for peeking in, it's great we can repost and true there are times when I feel that less speaks more..this as you know came about with certain resolutions about where to write..have been to Mark's site it's cool too and he's very supportive..


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