navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #18 » Sunsets And Clouds...revised
Open Poetry #18
Post A Reply Post New Topic Sunsets And Clouds...revised Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan

0 posted 2002-01-19 09:49 PM




Clouds, like paintbrushes
draw vivid sunset hues
across darkening skies

spreading a glow
like one last colorful sigh
as a tired world goes to sleep

tucking itself in
under a cozy blanket of stars
to awaken next morning
opening it's eyes to the newborn day

and as the day grows older
and the sun falls lower in the sky
time will come full circle
as once again
daytime fades to night

and shadows draw pictures
with darkness and light
and sunsets and clouds
paint beautiful sights


copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

© Copyright 2002 Lyra Nesius - All Rights Reserved
Startime
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
1 posted 2002-01-19 09:50 PM


Oh my gosh...what a stunning picture you have added to this poem....absolutely magnificent....your words truly do it justice. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
2 posted 2002-01-19 09:54 PM


Noah and Karen...I didn't realize that you had posted replies to the original version of this poem, before I deleted it because of some technical errors I had made...
But thank you both for your very kind comments.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

ecrivan
Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
3 posted 2002-01-19 10:08 PM


It is a gift of life to be able to appreciate lengthening of days and approaching sunsets, nicely done


Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
4 posted 2002-01-19 11:21 PM


Lyra, this is lovely, and gave me such a peaceful feeling tonight. Thank you. If I could reach through this screen you would get a really big hug. Hope cyber hugs will do.
Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
5 posted 2002-01-19 11:54 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...I love the picture that you added with this gorgeous classic of yours, this is soooooooo delightful! I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #18 » Sunsets And Clouds...revised

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary