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Rodney Belcher
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Taylor, Michigan

0 posted 2002-01-19 09:14 PM


Never ending
Never slowing to allow
True enjoyment of life
Never passing quick enough
To stop hurt or rectify
Love and comfort

Plodding along
Impervious to the harm
Caused unknown
We allow it to master us
As we become slaves
To its unfeeling trek

We never have enough
Till it’s too late
Then when we have it never-ending
We curse it for its being

For something that cannot be held
Its hold on us is never in doubt
Like faith and the very air we breathe
Although we aren’t able to see
It exists despite our faults

Lets Love one another and let God do the worrying,
Rodney

© Copyright 2002 Rodney Belcher - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
1 posted 2002-01-19 09:19 PM


Time....both a curse and a blessing as it marches on without ceasing. You have captured time well in this poem....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-01-19 09:28 PM


Rodney, you have penned a very 'timely' piece!  
Very well done....time marches on.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-01-19 09:47 PM




(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, time always exists and it can be woeful but then also our friend if we live up to it every moment! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rodney, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
4 posted 2002-01-19 09:59 PM


Yes sir, this is and endless curse and blessing wrapped in a package deal. Nicely said


Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

5 posted 2002-01-21 09:57 AM


A write that will touch throughout time Rodney.  Nice penning.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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