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Haunting Visions |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“HAUNTING VISIONS” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Night falls, darkness enters, searching thoughts abound… Shadows misty, all within, to see, but confound… Love wanting, seeking, wherever, ceaselessly… Not knowing where, or when, perhaps tonight, if any… Lost within, if one can, cloudy images of you… Only a touch, an embrace, enticing hearts, anew… One touch, one kiss, forever to know… Haunting visions, deeply, none of long ago… ~~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
One touch, one kiss, forever to know… Haunting visions, deeply, none of long ago… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Bill....you just keep getting better and better! Great imagery and feeling! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Haunting Visions, so truly beautiful. Sometimes the visions, they linger yes? wonderful words you give us tonight Bill. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-19-2002 08:04 PM).] |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill, as always, your poetry is very nice, with a hint of sadness and longing. Leaves the reader hoping all will be well for you. Keep smilin' - Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...This is wonderful. Speaks so vividly of dreams of love and hope of future love. EXTREMELY WELL-WRITTEN. ***Ivy Rose |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such visions as these are not new to me...I could feel your words they say so well the shadow of such haunting visions. I hope your vision becomes clearer and is filled with all the love you desire. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"One touch, one kiss, forever to know… Haunting visions, deeply, none of long ago…"    (sigh) Soooooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, your loving heart always continues to grow with your lovely words! (big hugggsssssss) May love forever fill your heart and have you envisioning heaven and happiness forever! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy I suppose you think that I’m going to praise you to the skies? Hmmm? …….. Well, of course I am, this is utterly utterly wonderful as YOU very well know. This is really fabulous writing sometimes when you don’t expect it showers of moonbeams descend on you. They dropped like little twinkles of delight when I read this. Oh my eyes they are refreshed and my soul is washed in joy this is sooooooooo beautiful. Absolutely first class writing  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you always write so romatically and always know just what to say to make one feel your presence... M |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"Haunting visions" so so nice Bill. floria |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
A hauntingly beautiful piece of work, Bill... it echoes in my heart. Thank you for sharing, once again, your vision. Hugz, Pepper |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Not of long ago..That is an interesting thought at the end. Excellent write, Bill. Sandra |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
touch of memory perhaps? very nice, Emily |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Bill, I must have my daily dose of your beautiful poetry! loved it |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
this is nice, Bill, you sound like me, a real romantic kind of guy Robert |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill~ Indeed haunting....love it when the visions linger, lovely my friend.... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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