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Searching for the Seeker |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Searching For the Seeker One would think it easier In light of freshly fallen snow To see where the Seeker has been To know where it is he may go Hear the owl’s whoosh of wing As only a feather-light breeze Sparkles the hint of the Seeker All I hear are hushed memories There I am again, on a path of worn There I am, in the mists of time The grasses brush me in their wake I know, for these memories are solely mine The Seeker stands before me, walks Among recollection’s path Spirits call to him, throughout all time Cries of carnages aftermath Then he turns to beckon me on, I Follow Seeker to meadow’s light He turns, pulls me to his arms, Searching again his lover’s rights He speaks not a word, but I hear The whispers of his heart to mine It is my destiny to record them Evidencing truths of these times The shadow stirs, the mists recede, The Seeker fades into the night I feel the Seeker not so far from me, I shall find him in my write… ~*~ ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 19 January 2002 |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very esoteric...I love the ethereal feel to this, truly. It has a caressing sensation. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Hear the owl’s whoosh of wing As only a feather-light breeze Sparkles the hint of the Seeker All I hear are hushed memories" This entire poem is so magical, but I especially liked these lines. What wonderful imagery! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Where does the Sunshine go? The Seeker knows...  Your writing is wonderful. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Sooooooooo wonderfully said, sweet friend, these words are so uplifting and esoteric! (kiss on cheek) May you find all your heart seeks for and may all your dreams seek you! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
He speaks not a word, but I hear The whispers of his heart to mine He who seeks shall find~ You just have to believe it!! Lovely poem Sunshine. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Hear the owl’s whoosh of wing As only a feather-light breeze Sparkles the hint of the Seeker All I hear are hushed memories Lovely Sunshine..enjoyed your words  ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Oceanus Junior Member
since 2002-01-18
Posts 10The Pacific |
I can almost see the snow, feel the breeze and touch the meadow grasses. You certainly did a good job of transporting us there. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic imagery in this piece Karilea! And....Oh how I do love it! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow, oh wow!!! I do love this poem...sort of like my Phantom of PiP....such a mysterious figure that comes to you...gives you pleasure... Enjoyed this Kari... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
He speaks not a word, but I hear The whispers of his heart to mine It is my destiny to record them Evidencing truths of these times Request time! Well I sure loved this but is there more?~* CARPE' DIEM *~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I just loved your imagery in this one, Karilea... Hear the owl’s whoosh of wing As only a feather-light breeze Sparkles the hint of the Seeker All I hear are hushed memories Great Job!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Dusty Rhodes Junior Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 27 |
Anything seems possible in the light of fresh fallen snow. This is a wonderful blending you have done here, Sunshine. I enjoyed it very much....Dusty |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"He speaks not a word, but I hear The whispers of his heart to mine' I love your lines, Sunshine you are absolutely enchanting in your writing. floria |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--This is so vivid, yet hushed with magic...loved it! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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