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craigrk
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0 posted 2002-01-19 12:45 PM




Homeless boots,
tormenting moments,
pushed by karmic journey –
wandering empty
endless doors of
no hellos, good-byes.

Pinched fingertips
on pitch black nights
still no touch-to memory –
doorbell rings,
no one there,
ever since dad died.


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strbbux
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1 posted 2002-01-19 12:49 PM


Oh Craig, you have so so touched my heart. I lost a son not too long ago and this just reached out to me. a good write, thanks for posting it and all my sympathy to you. floria
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2 posted 2002-01-19 02:13 PM


i pray that he knows how you feel, and is watching you. You will be with him again.
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3 posted 2002-01-19 02:16 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Craig, this is so so sad, my heart goes out to you and I know deep down that he will always be watching you from above smiling and will guide you with his love always! (big hugggsssss) I know these kind of losses so well, sweet friend, all our hearts are with you, God Bless You! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-01-19 02:22 PM



I know this feeling, and you've expressed it very well...I am sorry for this loss...

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