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WRBreezin
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0 posted 2002-01-19 11:32 AM



Elisia

Elisia don't confound me
Play my two remaining strings
in the blind faith of six
When your fingers reach for the chords
and the first impressions are empty
close your eyes and remember
The song hasn't changed
only the light you carried has dimmed
The melody is bright as ever
soundly seeped into the sunburst tones
of a warm body
Soul deep with the affection of you


Robert Joseph
©2002



© Copyright 2002 Robert Joseph - All Rights Reserved
rwood
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Tennessee
1 posted 2002-01-19 11:42 AM


soundly seeped into the sunburst tones
of a warm body


I have missed you! And you are still fantastic...wonderfully resonant.

Sincerely,
Regina

Victoria
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2 posted 2002-01-19 11:48 AM


Robert..i remember a wrbreezin signing my guestbook..you sneaky thing you.. ha didnt realize it was you..nice to be reading your words again..Mr. Breezin

                 ~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

WRBreezin
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3 posted 2002-01-19 12:01 PM



  Now, who could ask for more? To be missed and read by two of the most beautiful and talented writers, I'm aware of.

Thank you, Regina, and Victoria.

Robert Joseph

Ava`sEden
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4 posted 2002-01-19 08:03 PM


Soul deep with the affection of you


Wonderful love play Robert. Soul deep. Very deep. Enjoyed!

Ava~

Sunshine
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5 posted 2002-01-19 08:13 PM



You're back! and you're Breezin'...

Awesome!

A Whisper's Caress
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6 posted 2002-01-19 09:16 PM


If I may be allowed to say...
this is lovely indeed.

WRBreezin
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7 posted 2002-01-21 07:17 PM



Thank you, Ladies...

Sincerely,
  Robert Joseph

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