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Jaime Fradera
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0 posted 2002-01-18 09:45 PM



It is very early morning.
As I sit beside the window,
I hear the song:
Good morning, Mr. Sunshine.
You’ve brightened up my day.
Come sit beside me …
I walk into the kitchen
And find a box of Sunshine
On the counter.
The box is leaking,
And Sunshine spills
Across the counter and the floor.
I try to skoop it up.
The sunshine feels clean and fine,
Like prestine ocean beach sand,
Soft, and light, and fluffy,
Like falling snow caught in my hand.
I rummage through the cabinets
Looking for something I can keep it in.
I find a large empty coffee can, a pot.
I pour and skoop
The sunshine up
As best I can into the pot.
Then I find a plastic jar
Of what? … liquid Sunshine.
I decide to pour this also
in the pot,
and all the Sunshine suddenly dissolves
into bubbles of Light
which, having been invoked and called forth,
swell and swell,
filling the kitchen and the houseand me
with Light,
Light that could not be contained
Or be denied.

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1 posted 2002-01-18 09:49 PM



Jaime, you must know that I love this, but only because you painted such vivid pictures...well, that, and because I just really LIKE it!

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2 posted 2002-01-18 09:49 PM




(giggles) This is sooooooo beautiful and cute, sweet friend, what a beautiful spring cleaning with your words! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, your visions and love you share is always sunshine to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jaime, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-01-19 12:23 PM


Yes, Sunshine was smiling all over your counter today.

"and all the Sunshine suddenly dissolves
into bubbles of Light
which, having been invoked and called forth,
swell and swell,
filling the kitchen and the house and me
with Light,
Light that could not be contained
Or be denied."
That is so beautiful. And now, I'm singing again.

HEG
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4 posted 2002-01-19 12:41 PM


A very enjoyable read! It has a very smooth flow.

Harry

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5 posted 2002-01-20 10:42 AM


"Light that could not be contained/or be denied..."

This is great, Jaime... You have a wonderful way of seeing with your heart...Thank you for your great insights..

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6 posted 2002-01-20 12:28 PM


  Jaime, my heartsong, I think they need this dream on the east coast today. Bumping the sunshine.  
Startime
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7 posted 2002-01-20 12:54 PM


BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!!This is magically beautiful...it brought sunshine into my heart today. Wonderful, Jaime....I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2002-01-20 12:56 PM


enjoyed
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