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wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-01-20 02:54 AM

                       Do you
                       want to
                       change
                       your
                       Current
                       Location

Would you mind
just walking this way
it might not've been
what you planned on today

The shirt i wear
has a price tag too
The shirt i wear
was worn by you

             Do you want to
              change your
            Current Location

but you can't
get
onto your feet

Remember
you who
Put me here

Allow me
to help you
down this street

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (01-20-2002 02:55 AM).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-01-20 02:59 AM

Walt, this is intense. Homelessness and poverty are bitter shoes to wear. Being alone and without friends is on the same scale of despair.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-01-20 06:44 AM

Talk about walk a mile in my shoes...well he did.
Potent peom
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2002-01-20 06:56 AM

expressed only the way you could, hope you are ok, nice to see your words again. *s

M

Canuckster
Member

since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

4 posted 2002-01-20 07:09 AM

Well constructed and very thought provoking.

elisaseyes
Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 196
fort worth texas

5 posted 2002-01-21 10:46 PM

Thank Goodness its not a true story hmm Walt?

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-01-21 11:11 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) So very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all these homeless and lonely people and I pray with all my heart we can reach out to them all and help them down the street and to find love and what they need! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have a very loving and compassionate heart, this is sad but very well-written! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2002-01-21 11:17 PM

Yes, I would. I would like to be somewhere where it does not snow!!!

Good to see you again, Walt.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 2002-01-22 10:07 AM

A great variation on "lest you walk in my shoes"... at least that's how I read it, walt... Nicely done, sir wayout...

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

9 posted 2002-01-22 10:51 AM

Very cool! Very intense too...enjoyed the read!
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

10 posted 2002-01-23 09:27 PM

this is an awesome read! forgive me for not being able to read between the lines. when you get a chance will you help me fill in the blanks and let me know where you got your idea? i cant get enough of the title...it leaves so much to the imaginikshun.

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