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ShadowRider
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0 posted 2002-01-18 06:14 PM


The Fishing Hole

soft waves slap in sleeping metronome
on a melted sand shore he is languidly reposed
dwarfed, but today:an adult
alone
trawling fortune and leisure by fishing pole
his knees a chin-holder
his ears and nose tomato-splattered by the sun
any other day, he wriggles on other's hook
with school primers under arm
but today he is the teacher
his students silver slivers slithering
below in glassine reflections of his eyes
perhaps this is all he was destined to catch
perhaps he accepts the disappointment of an empty bucket
but today
he is a fisher of men
finding his own soul
finding his own way



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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2002-01-18 06:21 PM


ShadowRider - a lot of depth, and thought in this one. Excellent write...

BC

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2 posted 2002-01-18 06:58 PM




(smiles) Very powerfully expressive piece, sweet friend, deep down we are all fishers; fishing for love and truth and wisdom, may we all find the ultimate catch of joy! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ShadowRider
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3 posted 2002-01-18 09:32 PM


Hi Bill! *s*  Thanks for dropping a 'lion' here.  
I appreciate your generous reply, and wishing ya a good weekend.  tSR

Noah, i knew you would get the fisherman analogy.  Not to mention how we all need to fish some happiness, and who we are.  hmmmm  wish i caught more fish on my line....*smiles*  Thankx Homiez!  tSR

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