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Morcastlin
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0 posted 2002-01-18 03:37 PM


When You...


When you love me I am dancing on air
When you love me life is going just right
When you love me you warm up the cold night
When you love me I'm entranced by your stare

When you hold me I feel lovely and fair
When you hold me I'm caught in love's light
When you hold me our souls meld and take flight
When you hold me eternity we share

When you are gone I wish you were still here
When you are gone I dream of us kissing
When you are gone I know how I love you

When you return I will hold you close, dear
When you return my heart won't be missing
When you return let us begin anew


© Copyright 2002 Bonnie B. Hayes - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2002-01-18 03:40 PM


Bonnie, this is very nice, very nice
these words never lose their meaning...

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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2 posted 2002-01-18 03:42 PM




(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, and may he always return and make your heart feel so happy and loved forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-01-18 03:46 PM


*sigh* oh yes....what a beautiful declaration of love. Absolutely beautiful. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Morcastlin
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4 posted 2002-01-18 05:04 PM


Thanks all! This was written for my husband. He's great, but sometimes we get so caught up in our every day lives that it feels more like we're just friends living in the same house. But, then we get back on track and "begin anew" and everything is back to being wonderful. ;o)
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