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Moonlight Lotion |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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May I kiss you? Like glorious stars kiss the cherubs within the sky May I hold you? Like the cosmos embracing the tranquility of the moon The way dancing waves caress shoals of the ocean massaging gently with warm moonlight lotion Surrender within the pharos of the night making love beneath a satiny starlit kite as soft ivory sands, gingerly flow with inevitable tides of the sea May I kiss you?..May I hold you? May I make love to thee? You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very beautiful.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you are soooooooo romantic! The visions you create are always so heavenly, may you forever be bathed in the light of true love and satin happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, ah, how you always inspire me! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
This is so very lovely! The imagery was fabulous! Well done!!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Newell thank you so much..for peeking in today  Noah..thank you for your sweet comments morcastlin..thank you very much and im glad you enjoyed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria - thee may, if thee wishes... BC |
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HEG Junior Member
since 2002-01-18
Posts 42 |
A very well-written poem! A very enjoyable read.... Harry |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~V~ This is more than lovely.... stunning... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-18-2002 07:21 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Goodness Victoria...yep...I am sure there are a lot of guys who would resoundingly say YESSSSS...YES you may....Nice write, love your visions you always have within. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Bill..thee will think about it..  he heHarry..thank you very much..glad you enjoyed Lauren..Thank you so much Lauren..always nice hearing from you Barry..As long as my husband says yes..bring your batman mask with you  ha... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Soft, warm and beautiful, Victoria... You should bottle that lotion and sell it.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The way dancing waves caress shoals of the ocean massaging gently with warm moonlight lotion I have to love that verse, (of course) and the way you worked the lotion in. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wonderful write ~V, good to see your words. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoy your romantic words Victoria...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Madame..nice to hear from you as always thank you Ms.Serenade..yes i am sneaky ha Donna..thank you..and thanks for peeking in James..thank you James..happy you enjoyed my words |
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