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Hips Pips and Nips Written with Larry C.
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Hips Pips and Nips Written with Larry C. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Hey Larry, I used to be young and Oh! so hip but now my curvaceous hips surprisingly slip when I dance to old songs from Gladys Knight and her Pips I loved to twist and do the monkey too the mashed potatoes and slow dance to the blues I loved wearing my yellow polka dot bikini but now Larry, before I wear it I need to drink a few vodka martini’s I loved making out at the drive-in movies parking in the back…I thought it was groovy swooning over Elvis’s blue suede shoes he had more money than Howard Hughes Hey Victoria, I too used to be young but not that hip there never was a time I even took a nip never learned to dance, not even to old songs I didn’t know how to twist but boy could I shout along I’ve always loved a yellow polka dot bikini in fact the girls could turn my head And not just 'cause those suits were tiniwini When I wasn’t working on my ’55 Chevy But now Victoria, I’ve got my girl and think a lot about that Chevy swooning over cars was what I did best age has taught me I can’t do the rest You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I love it, I love it, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friends! (smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I wish I could live those times like you two did, it sounded like so much fun! I would like to learn how to dance and swing and do the mashed potato like that! (BIG GROUP HUG! YAY!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You two make a wonderful duet! You have such a beautiful hearts, sweet Larry and Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
HAHA this was adorable and brought back tons of memories for me. loved it. floria |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I luv a yellow polka-dot bikini, especially if its teeny weeny and not on a one-eyed, one-horned, flying, purple people-eater! Well done you two  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Noah..i loved all those dances..i will show you those dances sometime even if i do throw my hips out haa..  Floria..thank you floria..im sure it did bring back some happy memories..  Interloper..Splish splash to you too ha..  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I can recall, the bikini and when... It's been awhile, though I'm tempted again To show off my body, my hips and the more. What else to do when you seek to allure. *s I know about Gladys, her Pips and her Knight. I have my own that I treasure despite. I love to dance closely with no room to spare, Twisting and mashing, gasping for air... Don't need the drinking, life's more than I need To inspire the thrills that the drive-in would feed But I'm never too old to love again, swoon Awaiting am I, this child of the moon... Wynter...enjoying you and Larry *s "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." (J.Garland) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-18-2002 11:05 AM).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Fantastic from you both....it had a little melody I could hear playing as I read... HUGS... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-18-2002 11:18 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Victoria, A good joint write and I enjoyed it much. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Wynter..that was great ...loved it and im sure Larry will too..hugss thanks for reading hon Lauren..thank you so much Lauren..glad you ejoyed Sy..thank you Sy..yes it was fun writing about the good ole days ha.. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Victoria, Thank you for the fun of writing and the pleasure of seeing this poem posted. Love the hips...I mean the dance.  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
hips pips and nips but no flips larry ha.. ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Encore encore!! Loved the nostalgia you guys and the teeny weenie yellow polka dots! Oh boy, this takes me way back and was so much fun to read! Groovy baby!! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling delightedly* Oh I absolutely love this...BRAVO!!!STANDING OVATION!!  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Victoria and Larry!! What a dynamic duo! This was terrific and so full of memories!! Boy, are we all giving our ages away today! Loved it...just loved it! ~Hugs to you both for the memories, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
oh, you two, this is great sounds just like a couple going at it in laughter and good fun. I love it! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Ms.serenade thank you..groovy times ha..i loved the dances..my favorite part of growing up.. Karen..thank you Karen..glad you liked..it was fun writing even if he didnt know how to twist ha... Nancy..thank you..i gave my age away along time ago when i said i was a nana Kathleen..thank you ..yes and i really did lose my bikini in the water just as the song goes..it wasnt polka dot but it was yellow and i was red..haa... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Victoria & Kathleen, And I was happy! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Haa yes i bet you were ...and btw Larry thank you for asking me to write with you...i always enjoy collaborating.. ~Victoria~ |
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