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OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
Leaning on elbows that have pressed dents in a thousand bars, pushing keys on a keyboard like a drunk dancer playing hopscotch, net connected, my 21 inches hard and ready, I feel the pull as my face is sucked to fascination. Search engines groan at the load my lack of knowledge bears, I am a kid again in old man skin, looking up the unknown addresses wondering why and how and if I should, then getting sidetracked on some thread where poetry or prose or 2002 autos or women in pantyhose bending is the topic, I lift my arms and grip the edges of the neon lips that suck my skin, I pull back 'til my shoulders ache, the vacuum is tight it drains my pores I struggle and survive, log outs are such bliss, finally the rest room and coffee, and another window that only has one world behind. © OWG (reposted by request) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh yes.....  I like this very much....glad you reposted it so I could read it |
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OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
thanx SEA..(grin) |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
You have a fantastic way of seeing and revealing to the readers....your words...Images...and meaning....always a pleasure.. Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-18-2002 11:42 AM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* oops too close for comfort...LOL I love the way this poem made me look at me...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
Lauren, thanx babe...I hate this thing sometimes...then it winks at me and whispers and well...hooks me back in. Startime, was that your face I heard slirp loose of the dreaded neon lips of Mr. Dell or HP? thanx for the giggles and read. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It's far too easy to use this as an addiction...to replace a love life...a home life..a job....a hobby....but I love to read ...and you write a good one sir.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The worlds best drug....(legal and all that good stuff) nothin like a poetry high babe...good good stuff here Owg... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too am addicted to this site; I love to read and write always! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet OWG, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
"'til my shoulders ache, the vacuum is tight it drains my pores" This was my favorite part!! Nicely penned |
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