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Sonnet for Marsha
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Sonnet for Marsha |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Could I write a sonnet showing your depth? A picture of the morning rising soft Loveliness in height and length and breadth And giving me wingspans to soar aloft If I could write a sonnet to your love To feel the oceans roar within your touch And soar on winds of loving lift above You all my deepest thoughts enrich so much And could the jewels you show be seen in write As ever mindful of your wondrous sheen I write love sonnets deep in to the night Yet I can't find the words to say and mean Should I write a sonnet that glows in grace? No it's enough to see your lovely face Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Keth, this is just lovely. Sweet and mushy. Cheryl |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Such a beautiful Mushy sonnet, sweet friend, I love it!!! (winks) Ooohhhhhh...Marsha is so happy to ahve such a beautiful friend like you, we all love you both so so much! (kiss on cheek) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, I think you did very well. Enjoyed |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth darling sister of my soul, what can I say this is an utterly utterly brilliant poem. Thank you thank you thank you, you know without a shadow of a doubt that I love it. You know that this is utterly wonderful don’t you, the flow is just perfect Truly sensational writing, beauty is always welcome darling girl and this is soooooooo beautiful. YOU are beautiful as well your heart simply glows in this one truly sensational Thank you darling sister for all you are continue to shine as you do so well   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Ok, which one of you is going to take the long distance flight to have lunch and shopping? I think it's wonderful to read of such a great friendship formed over the airwaves. That's what makes the Internet something special. I enjoyed this read, Kethry, write on.......... Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Kethry, Wonderful write. Marsha sure is inspiring some great reading matter. She should be proud.  Nan |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Oh, this is such a wonderful sonnet! Bravo! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* you always capture the heart and soul of our dear Mushy...this is just beautiful. I love it. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kethry - yes, it is very sweet, and mushy, for Mushy.... BC |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautifully written sonnet, Keth... Its so hard to believe that you and Marsha have never met in person. You have an enviable friendship.   copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marsha may consider herself sonnetized! Nice work, Keth |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The emotion in this is the gift of poetry......to me. Thanks~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think Marsha would rather see a poem by you than anything else on her birthday... and you did her right proud... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh nice nice nice, and that last line, awesome keth, floria |
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