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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-01-18 02:14 AM


One Love


If we both care
for each other
we will keep coming
closer and closer
together.

Unless of course
one of us should
stop caring
for the pursuit
of love

then I am afraid
we would slowly
drift apart

and I know
this could become
one love that would
leave me heartbroken
forever.


JamesLee
January17
2002


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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2002-01-18 03:15 AM


Gosh, James,  I sure hope you get closer together. Keep thinking positive thoughts!
(but you might also want to keep your fingers crossed)  

Kethry
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2 posted 2002-01-18 06:10 AM


And this could be the one love that lasts a lifetime...you never know until you try it.
Good write
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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3 posted 2002-01-18 12:28 PM


James, I know just what you mean. Well expessed.
Sandra

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4 posted 2002-01-18 12:32 PM


It does take 2 and the truth of Love is that to be fully invested you have to give unreservedly and if the other should cease the pain will increase.


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5 posted 2002-01-18 12:33 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Sooooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, I pray with all my heart that you and her get closer together and forever find true happiness and live a life with love by your side joyfully! (sigh) I think we can all relate to these feelings; I'm in love with the most beautiful girl of my dreams and all I have to do is find a way to her! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Ariana
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6 posted 2002-01-18 12:34 PM


Oh Jeepers James I need a tissue.  I know how you feel and the pain does really hurt.  I love the way you express your feelings in words.
Irish Rose
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7 posted 2002-01-18 01:35 PM


It takes two, baby, it takes two, baby, just you and me...

reminded me of that old song.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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just out of reach
8 posted 2002-01-18 01:51 PM


James - This is the chance we take. I enjoyed this write. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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9 posted 2002-01-18 03:00 PM


James this is so beautiful, I am so hoping it all ends happy for you. floria
Startime
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10 posted 2002-01-18 03:56 PM


*sigh* Hold on to the love...keep the romance alive...gaze with desire upon each other and love for a lifetime of joy...***big hugs***

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

His Poet
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11 posted 2002-01-18 03:56 PM


James, the sad part is we have no control of the other person's feelings. Mostly hard work and continual communication keeps relationships in the "Forever" catagory.
I liked your expression of love. Cheryl

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12 posted 2002-01-18 04:38 PM


James, I love this one.  So well expressed.  I do hope it all works out for you!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Bill Charles
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13 posted 2002-01-18 06:19 PM


James - what a loving gentle write! I love it, and glad that I didn't miss it...

BC

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14 posted 2002-01-18 09:05 PM


Feelings that can be related to well...You
write from your heart...and I understand
your words well...

Tracey
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15 posted 2002-01-18 10:26 PM


Sounds like a very special love James.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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16 posted 2002-01-20 01:04 PM


You've found love, but I hope this love doesn't leave you behind. Hope you'll have it and keep it, for always.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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17 posted 2002-01-20 05:29 PM


loved it one of your best
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