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bfutter New Member
since 2002-01-18
Posts 1 |
what is this feeling lost alone together I am, I was I could be again no? here? there? where did I go, find me help me, find me I lost the me in team I lost myself I am lost Find me! jac [This message has been edited by bfutter (01-18-2002 12:43 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to these blue pages, that move so fast sometimes I get lost in here. I enjoyed this poem, and hope you find yourself in time to post another one soon. Have fun!  |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
conveys your confusion very well. "lost the me in team" dig that line... lookin out for more. you've got a cool style in your writing. lost, but there's a knowledge of a haven. dig it. *simplify* |
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mauddib Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 119melbourne australia |
There you are! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
bfutter, got you! Now that I've found you I will place you here so you don't get lost again. Welcome to the blue pages. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions. I think I'm, err, going to enjoy your poetry... Please check your E-mail for a special Greeting! Karilea |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey loved the title , but you know what!! to "err is human Hope |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! This was well done and enjoyed! Not to worry...we won't let you get lost! I look forward to seeing more of your work! ~Hugs, Nancy Lee~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bfutter, Welcome to passions. Did you try 911? Enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
bfutter - Interesting read. Is that you behind my puter screen? Welcome to Passions! Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. [This message has been edited by Nightshade (01-18-2002 09:36 AM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to Passions. I look forward to more of your work Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
HI-- welcome aboard...powerful write....enjoyed and look forward to more... Greeneyes~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-18-2002 11:39 AM).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Welcome to the best poetry site there is! I hope you enjoy it! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! BEAUTIFUL DEBUT, SWEET FRIEND, I LOVE IT!!! And you can never get lost here, for you are loved by many you are very special to us all! (smiles) Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
bfutter - nicely said... BC |
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