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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
She smokes her last cigarette just before the lights go out. There, in the ashes, are the breaths she lost, but here in the words are the ones she exhaled, the ones held inside for so long. She hopes someday, somewhere to be remembered. She simply burned out. Emily [This message has been edited by emily (01-17-2002 10:56 PM).] |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
This was both interesting and kind of sad. I enjoyed reading this! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Emily, this is awesome! "There, in the ashes, are the breaths she lost, but here in the words are the ones she exhaled" |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
Thank you both, I'm sorry I didn't thank you before I don't get on much! Emily |
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