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I Paint My Love
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I Paint My Love |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 I Paint My Love By: Noah Eaton 1/17/02 Every night in my dreams, I paint my love Heartbeats inspiring desire Eyes pull out clean canvas, eyes sketching the one I dream of Silkened heart bleeding in a rainbow spectrum Silky wavy hair flowing with grace Flowing across her back, against her lovely face Coloring her soft peach skin, that I long to touch Brushing it gently with a light moistened haze Dappling two gorgeous eyes, winking at me in amorous glance Reflecting the heavens to me, shining with light Looking deep into my heart, feeling the love I have for her To hold her with loving care, holding her hands With the blood of my heart, I brush her gorgeous ruby lips Slowly drying in softening in the heat of my desire Satin velvet lips painted on her angelic face Longing to embrace in my first and every kiss Every day in my dreams, I paint my dream lover Creating my own version of a love story Pinocchio Longing to embrace her, facing obstacles until my dreams come true To make my art become a dream come true, my one true lover [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-17-2002 09:37 PM).] |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
*sigh*, this is lovely Noah. What an enchanting dream. How hard it is to see your dream so clearly, paint it so vividly, and not be able to hold it in your arms. I hope you can overcome your obstacles and make her your reality one day If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? [This message has been edited by Tracey (01-17-2002 09:44 PM).] |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
" with the blood of my heart" Oh Noah, this is so nice. floria |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Noah my prince, I love this! You make me feel so full of life like a bright rainbow! Love ya sweetie  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* yes, you do, Noah, and you paint it with such brilliant colors. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Every night in my dreams, I paint my love Heartbeats inspiring desire Eyes pull out clean canvas, eyes sketching the one I dream of Silkened heart bleeding in a rainbow spectrum Beautiful dear one...simply lovely  ~Victoria~  You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Sweet Noah, this was exquisite! Absolutely exquisite! What more can I say?! Bravo! Love, Bonnie |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Noah, of all the beauty you have written that I've had the privilege to read so far, this is at the top. Exquisite, romantic and dreamy. She is out there writing lovely words of her heart wondering when she'll find you. It will be when the timing is perfect in His will. Cheryl |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Noah - you certainly are an artist with many strengths. You also have a very vivid imagination and can capture all of the vibrant colors in your words. Hmmmmmmmmmm, nicely done. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sweet Noah, What a delightful poem. Enjoyed it !! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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