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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-01-17 09:31 PM

My Favorite Song

sing me a lullaby
rock me sweet
I feel the rhythm
in your heart beat
safely protected
in arms of calm
a song of harmony
my favorite song
cradle of warmth
to forever keep
cushioned in pleasure
ease me to sleep

"I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow)

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (01-18-2002 09:52 AM).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-01-17 09:48 PM

What more could anyone
ask for in a poem of such
comfort and peace. This
certainly had all that and
more. Nicely done, Helen.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-01-17 09:50 PM

helen - one of the best I've seen of your writings. It is very beautiful, soft and tender....

BC

Morcastlin
Member

since 2002-01-14

Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA

3 posted 2002-01-17 10:16 PM

Well done and well said!!! This is so sweet and beautiful! Excellent poetry!!!!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-18 12:38 PM

(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your loving heart always shine sin your beautiful words! (kiss on cheek) May you forever sing loves sweet song with love close to your heart! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2002-01-18 01:20 AM

Helen, it's good to read your poetry again. This is delicately beautiful, it's a keeper

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

6 posted 2002-01-18 11:34 AM

There is nothing like it.....

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-01-18 09:03 PM

This could certainly be....your favorite
song....

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2002-01-18 09:59 PM

Dear Poetess, this one is so soft and just what I needed on my way to hopefully sweet slumber. Thankyou. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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