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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

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High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2002-01-17 09:05 PM

my dreams lay still
at the foot of you

each moment
finds you further
than the last

you step into my heart
and pitch confetti 'round
then say goodnite
before it falls

my dreams interrupted
by silence
i heard only the door
closing
and i opened my eyes
to find the reality
you left behind

bits of paper on the floor

picking them up
i scribble upon each one
one word at a time

then i lay them out together
at your feet

these, my dreams

confetti wishes

one day, maybe one day
they will fall into our hands

-dgvarner
12-21-00

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

[he] comes to me when i'm feelin' down..inspires me without a sound..[he] touches me... -b joel

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-17 09:15 PM

(sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it!!! (smiles) May you forever find true happiness with the love of your life and may you together scoop up this confetti and shower the beauty of these dreams upon you and him forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Midnitesun

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Gaia

2 posted 2002-01-17 09:42 PM

dg, it sounds like someone is toying with your heart, and acting as if its just a Mardi Gras party!

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2002-01-17 09:46 PM

Yes, this had a sorrowful feel
to it. Loved the metaphor
"confetti wishes" and I immediately
thought of something precious,
meant to be celebrated but sadly
wasted.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2002-01-17 10:12 PM

This is simply lovely. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2002-01-17 10:22 PM

Wow, I love the way you’ve written this. A dream should not have to be reduced to a confetti wish...sadly though, they too often are.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

6 posted 2002-01-18 06:21 AM

This is a sadly beautiful read. I hope he helps you gather up your dreams.

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

7 posted 2002-01-18 07:22 AM

"one day, maybe one day
they will fall into our hands"

...MIDNITE, KATHLEEN, TRACEY..
ok, yeah..i guess it does have a sad feel about it...come to think of it, when i wrote it i was feeling a bit blue...

but when reading it again, i was dwelling more on the end lines

so...i'll post a happy repost next time...LOL  thanks for reading!
MISTLETOE..you followed me!  you picked out the part i was trying to convey this time around!  thanks
CHRIS.. thank you!
ALAN..thanks!  i think he will..we will..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

[he] comes to me when i'm feelin' down..inspires me without a sound..[he] touches me... -b joel

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (01-18-2002 07:23 AM).]

Parker
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ON

8 posted 2002-01-18 03:02 PM

Hi sweets, reading this I see it can go both ways. If you read the poem in a positive note in every sense. It is very hopeful about the sprinkling of love and wishes into ones heart. I guess this is tempered by the reality message.... don't ya just hate reality.

I will go with the positive message, its what I need.

Parker

dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida

9 posted 2002-01-18 11:59 PM

PARKER..yes..i see this one being read in both ways too..

i guess we pick out what we need in poetry .. when we need it ..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

[he] comes to me when i'm feelin' down..inspires me without a sound..[he] touches me... -b joel

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2002-01-21 10:54 PM

DG~
Oh my friend ... *sigh* I loved this the first read ...
and now it speaks to me again~
Thank you so much for sharing from your sweet beautiful heart~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...

11 posted 2002-01-24 05:54 AM

I'm with Marge! This one speaks, loudly! Take care!

It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian

dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida

12 posted 2002-01-24 08:05 AM

MARGIE & EAGLE..thank you my friends

i'm glad you can like it twice..lol

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

[he] comes to me when i'm feelin' down..inspires me without a sound..[he] touches me... -b joel

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