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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-01-17 07:03 PM


I am the apple picked by Eve,
the mother of the snake.
I am not evil, as perceived,
I'm simply God-forsaked.


Within my skin,
a five-point star,
circled by the breath of Kore...
My only sin,
should I be marked,
is a yen to dare to ponder more...



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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-01-17 07:17 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is such a wonderful response, sweet friend, your heart shines with such legend and narrates such fabulous imagery and emotion! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Poet deVine
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2 posted 2002-01-17 07:19 PM


If you're an apple, then you must be a golden delicious!!

Enjoyed this my friend.

strbbux
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3 posted 2002-01-17 08:29 PM


I don't know what the challenge was, but I do like how you wrote this poem . very nice. floria
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4 posted 2002-01-17 10:36 PM


Good writing, I have always thought Eve was maligned unfairly.
Sandra

Paula Finn
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5 posted 2002-01-17 10:44 PM


Yepthats you alright LOL....hey girl I've really missed you and your poems...sigh...good to be back home.
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6 posted 2002-01-17 11:44 PM


dare to ponder. . . I like that. . . that's where ideas are born. . .and where life changes. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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