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woodtic
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0 posted 2002-01-17 06:49 PM



maybe some of these?


Without reserve.

With wild abandon.

Inside your skin.

Four hours before climax.

Eternally.

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1 posted 2002-01-17 06:54 PM


Can I take time out for a cold shower?
All of those will do nicely.

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2 posted 2002-01-17 06:55 PM




(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is sooooooo wonderful! I love it!!! (big hugggsssss) May loves happiness forever fillyour heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-01-17 06:56 PM


HAHAH great on wood tic. floria
woodtic
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4 posted 2002-01-17 07:16 PM


Thanx guys, there's nothing like the practice. Perfection always missed but who for just a little spot would miss the whole trip.
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