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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2002-01-17 04:03 PM


Quiet Wings
~*~

I hide within a vase of flowers by your bed
peeking from my tiny cocoon of shred
your unsuspecting face is aglow
bathed in silver moonlight
desperate wings of quiet
should I take flight?
seems I’m always watching from a distance
your whisper could set me free in an instant
not much keeps me here

BloomingRose

[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (01-17-2002 04:06 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 DebraS. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-17 04:09 PM


Your writing always has such an elegant feel. Lovely work. Cheryl
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2 posted 2002-01-17 04:40 PM


Such a quiet whisper. Set yourself free, what will be, will be.
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3 posted 2002-01-17 05:00 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautifully expressed, sweet friend, may your loving heart shine and set your spirit free with laughter and joy forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-01-17 05:18 PM


....EXQUISITE....

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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5 posted 2002-01-17 06:13 PM


Very very nice Bloomin Rose. floria
BloomingRose
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6 posted 2002-01-18 10:18 AM


Thank you all. She is free indeed...

Hugs,
Deb

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