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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-02-05 09:23 PM


(Here's one sad candy heart poem, don't worry, this is one year old and I feel very happy now!!!)  

MISS ME
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/10/01

Do you miss me?
I can't stop thinking about you
Along with you, a huge part of my heart has left me
You are everything that's true

Have you missed me?
I can't sleep at night, lonely without yolu, poignant arrows of sorrow aching my heart, tracing bittersweet dents
I burn for you, my love, when we are together, we explode in felicity
I try and keep strong, but you are everything to me, all I have is memories remnants

Oh love, do you miss me?
Oh, how I pray you'll return to our home sweet home
Our home is where the heart is, and you are my joy, sweetie
Without you, I feel scared, and I don't know which way I must go

Oh love, have you missed me?
Because my heart bleeds for you
Oh love, can you see how much I love you, together, we feel free
Oh love...I miss you so, please come back...I need you
I miss you...
I love you...

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-05-2002 09:24 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-05 09:28 PM


I'm glad you are happier this year. Not me..
I could have written this to someone..but I won't, cause it would not bring the right answer.
Sandra

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2 posted 2002-02-05 09:38 PM


this is so sad Noah....I'm so glad you are happier now
Startime
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3 posted 2002-02-05 09:56 PM


I am so glad that happiness has replaced this sadness you once felt...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2002-02-05 10:01 PM


Ah Noah, I am so pleased this was from last year...look how far you've come!!
Good write sweetie!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-02-05 10:32 PM


Wonderful that you can say that you are happy Noah...
I miss my sweetheart if I don't see her at least five or six times a week...this is the fuel for my desire...James

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6 posted 2002-02-05 11:16 PM


Noah, this is so very sad indeed, but to know that happiness has come by to lift you up shows that you are always prepared to raise up to a challenge. Cheers.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2002-02-05 11:19 PM


Noah - yes indeed a very sad poem, but something happened to lighten your life. Is it she?

BC

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8 posted 2002-02-06 12:42 PM


How can we miss you when you are always here? Just kidding, I would miss you if you weren't here every day! And so would many, many others.
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9 posted 2002-02-06 03:12 PM


I am glad to know that this poem is from some time ago. I love to see you happy, it is the best sight in the world.
(hugs)

Tiersdin
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10 posted 2002-02-06 03:23 PM


The sadness in this poem makes my heart ahce. I too am glad that this is from long ago and that you are now happy and in love!

*hugs*

~Tier

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11 posted 2002-02-06 03:31 PM


so glad to know that this one is from way ago, and that you are happier and so in love.


May love always brighten your path

(((hugs)))
Charisma

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