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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-01-17 11:29 AM



Breezin from the tunes
blowing out on the stereo.
Santana doing smooth
mellow soothing
my mind.
The sax grooves
surrounding me with
sway sounds.
Absorbed in
the music my body
moves to the beat.
My mind says
maybe it's time
for a little Klemmer,
cuz there's nothing like
a little Caress when
the mood strikes.....
and your body sways with
the breeze.....


(After reading BC,s bluesy poem, I remembered
writing this some time back.  Thanks for reminding me BC)


On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)


[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-17-2002 11:32 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-01-17 11:37 AM


I love it! Poetic inspirations dancing and swaying with the music....natural symbiotic harmony.
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2 posted 2002-01-17 11:45 AM


GentleSpirit~
I'm so glad Bill Charles dropped a quarter in your juke box of remember~
LOVELY thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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peaches73533
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3 posted 2002-01-17 12:03 PM


I love this.The music touches me.Nicely done.
Peaches

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2002-01-17 12:04 PM


Gentle Spirit - why thank you for helping you to remember this one. Now if I could just get that bluesy sax, and my bluesy guitar together, h'mmmmm, some sweet music I'm sure...

BC

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5 posted 2002-01-17 12:51 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it!!! Ooohhhhh...I should learn how to play a guitar so I can crron these Santana riffs of love like you do in your words so gorgeously! (giggles) I love it, sweet friend, let the music flow always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-01-17 01:40 PM


Donna~

you always have music in your soul....thanks for reminding us....wonderful... HUGS


Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

Apachecat906
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7 posted 2002-01-17 02:06 PM


Perfect poem, your words do smooth as well as Santana...I loved this 1
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8 posted 2002-02-20 02:25 PM


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