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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-01-17 11:19 AM


“BLUESY GUITAR”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Listen to the music, sexy it is,
rhythm inside, wanting to sway…
Eyes closed, can’t hold back,
these chords, which I play…

Standing on stage, looking out,
someone, to catch my eye…
Searching, hips moving around,
sevenths, elevenths, to amplify…

Dreamy inside, you’re there,
body moving, as soft as you can…
Thoughts drift, no words spoken,
tonight, is where it all began…

Your smile charms, you’ll wait,
as I sing to you, one more bar…
Now close to you on the floor,
with you, and this bluesy guitar…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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1 posted 2002-01-17 11:25 AM


Keep strummin those blues, BC. This is very good! Wish I could hear it in living audio.
Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2002-01-17 11:26 AM


Loving the blues BC.  You write it well.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Silver Streak
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3 posted 2002-01-17 11:28 AM


Well done!

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

N orth Carolina Girl
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4 posted 2002-01-17 11:34 AM


Bill,can you really play the guitar?This was very musical.I couldn`t resist.







Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

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5 posted 2002-01-17 11:40 AM


Bill~
EXACTLY ~
This is just what my sweetie pie plays~
And I only have eyes for him when he performs~
Sooooo welcomed this morning~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Bill Charles
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6 posted 2002-01-17 11:52 AM


Midnitesun - I loves dem blues...

Gentle Spirit - Nothing like listening to a sweet guitar playing them blues...

Silver Streak - thank you for coming by...

N orth Carolina Girl - yes I can play guitar, or rather I play at it. Love it, I do. And thanks for your reply...

Marge - and a welcome this morning to you. And I know what you mean when your sweetie pie plays. Thanks for coming by..


peaches73533
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7 posted 2002-01-17 12:05 PM


Keep playing, I can hear it in my mind.Such wonderful sounds.
Peaches

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8 posted 2002-01-17 12:08 PM






YAY!!! I love dem blues too! (giggles) Soooooo lovely and cute, sweet friend, your words always make me smile and sigh, this is soooooooo beautiful! May you forever strum chords of sweet melodies with your love in eternal happiness! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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9 posted 2002-01-17 01:44 PM


Bill~


How wonderful....to hear sing, or play the blues.....I love the Music in this....


Lauren~


Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-17-2002 01:45 PM).]

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10 posted 2002-01-17 01:47 PM


Bill - There's nothing like the blues to put the pink back in your cheeks. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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11 posted 2002-01-17 02:08 PM


Bill darling boy Mmmmm I could feel the music flowing darling boy. Absolutely excellent writing it has such wonderful movement.

You could run your fingers over my strings anytime darling boy And then you’d really see a melody played

Truly fabulous writing darling boy I really love it. This is another that is heading to my library. I hope you like it in there love

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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12 posted 2002-01-17 02:40 PM


Ohhh I like this..I've always wanted to learn to play guitar and my friend Josh promised to give me lessons!
Lady Ollyne
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13 posted 2002-01-17 05:01 PM


"Your smile charms, you’ll wait,
as I sing to you, one more bar…"

This Lady seems to recall...
and leaves you with a smile.

Lady Ollyne


"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

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14 posted 2002-01-17 06:17 PM


Oh I love the guitar and I can just hear it. floria
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