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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 01-17-2002 11:10 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal



Windswept Lovers

~*Marge Tindal*~
  
Across the plains of time indiscreet
his love has caressed the all of me
Upon the throne of barren reign
softly in death he spoke my name~

Felicity Dela Marcaesa comes once more
seeking your key to open my doors
Locks are meant to be broken
when no longer words are spoken~

Maiden of the chambers was I
until the master caught my eye
Took me to his heart-bed
though I knew we'd never wed~

Sixteen years in shadows hidden
for this Prince of man was bidden
to serve his country when the time came
for the crowning glory would be his fame~

But he must have one of more nobility
For him they sought blood lines of dignity
And though he tried to disagree
it was not ... no ... not to be~

So a chosen one was graced
with ring of wed on hand now placed
But he swore his heart was mine
and would be ... for all of time~

I did not care that he had wed
only that he kept my bed
Liaison of infidel minds
leaving beliefs of others behind~

I'll return when morning breaks
to share more of my mistakes
Caught now in the interim
of memories etched of him~


*And here she breathes again~
This mysterious muse from the meadow~
January 16, 2002

http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum53/HTML/000568.html




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (01-17-2002 11:14 AM).]

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 01-17-2002 11:16 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Oh Marge, Marge, Marge, this is just stunning words you present us with this morning.  TERRIFIC!!  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

inot2B
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2 posted 01-17-2002 06:24 PM       View Profile for inot2B   Email inot2B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inot2B

The words are exquisite in the way it validates the picture.  Beautifully done!!

"Caught now in the interim
of memories etched of him~"
strbbux
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3 posted 01-17-2002 06:27 PM       View Profile for strbbux   Email strbbux   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for strbbux

Oh now this was simply wonderful and the picture really enhanced it. floria
jwesley
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4 posted 01-17-2002 06:40 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

The pictue and the poem combined made the whole just wonderful, Marge.

jwesley
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5 posted 01-17-2002 06:41 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

Justice well served, Marge.  I'm hooked.
SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown


6 posted 01-17-2002 09:47 PM       View Profile for SmartChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SmartChick's Home Page   View IP for SmartChick

Marge, your poems are such a joy to read.
JamesMichael
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7 posted 01-17-2002 09:54 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Enjoyed this Marge...James
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8 posted 01-17-2002 09:56 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Lost love blows away in the winds of time. What an incredible write!

"I'll return when morning breaks
to share more of my mistakes"
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on the threshold of a dream


9 posted 01-18-2002 09:56 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I'm so glad she has gifted you with her story... for you tell it so beautifully! I love this, Marge... and can't wait for her to speak with you again. *S*
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10 posted 01-18-2002 12:26 PM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

Marge this is fantastic..are there others in a series I have missed? I must find them, if so.
Sandra
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Marge - Wow, quite the story here. I enjoyed this thoroughly. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Startime
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12 posted 01-18-2002 02:32 PM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

Stunning!!! I love the whole story of this one. BRAVO!!! Magnificent. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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Marge, you write as if you graced that bed. Lovely, enchanting and wonderfully worded. Cheryl
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14 posted 01-18-2002 03:25 PM       View Profile for Morcastlin   Email Morcastlin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Morcastlin's Home Page   View IP for Morcastlin

I simply melted with this fabulous poem of love and romance! This is magnificent!
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Beautiful, Marge!
Hugs!


Cor
Marge Tindal
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16 posted 01-19-2002 04:27 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

***Thank you ALL SO VERY MUCH~
I know not the where or the 'why' of this muse ...
only what she reveals on each visit~
Perhaps 'together' we will learn more of her musing of mysterious message ??

CarolinaMoon~
The first coming of Felicity Dela Marcaesa can be found at this link - entitled 'And She Breathes ...'~
http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum53/HTML/000568.html

I will wait patiently for her next 'message'~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
       noles1@totcon.com                   

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17 posted 01-22-2002 10:34 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Marge--You are blessed with an open spirit...the story breathes through you...and beautifully... Hugs!
cpalmer
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18 posted 01-23-2002 10:41 AM       View Profile for cpalmer   Email cpalmer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cpalmer

Marge,
what and exquisite poem and the picture is really cool!  I love it!  You have done it again, my dear poet friend!
Hugs
Cindi
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19 posted 01-23-2002 02:57 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

oh you knew that I would love this one, didn't you dear lady....love this gem!!!

Charisma
Marge Tindal
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20 posted 01-28-2002 09:46 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

*SweetFriends~
She comes to me ... I speak only what she utters~
'Open Spirit' ... yes, that MUST be it~
Thank you all soooooo much~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
       noles1@totcon.com                   

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise


21 posted 11-10-2004 05:15 PM       View Profile for NewEnglandlazurlu   Email NewEnglandlazurlu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NewEnglandlazurlu

Marge, great minds have we. I just adore this graphic and your interpretation of it.

I had just joined Passions when you posted this. I'm glad I got to read it.

huggles and smiles, Marti


A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi
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