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I'll Just Go Quietly
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I'll Just Go Quietly |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 I'll Just Go Quietly By: Noah Eaton 1/16/02 I'll just go quietly Crying in my loneliness Wallowing in tears I'll just go quietly Leaving my quill out to dry With a broken heart I'll just go quietly Unloved and vague to the world All my hopes lost dreams [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-16-2002 11:47 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - now we need to get down to the brass. Do not go anywhere, I'll say that again. Do not go anywhere. You have the warmest heart, and it's not right for you to go anywhere. So, I want you to stay. And write the sadness out of you. There... Sorry Noah, but you are a treasure, and keep writing... YOur friend, BC |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Sweetheart NO! Don;t go anywhere, you are wanted right where you are! I don't know who made you feel so unloved but believe me, you are sooo special. Please don't be sad, keep your head up and that pen of yours writing! ((((huggggggggggggggggsss)))) RP |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
Very Dylan Thomas  But so much more heart aching  I hope everything is alright and your heart heals and you decide to stay right where you are cause you're perfect in that spot.-R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy, firstly if you left Passions you would take away its heart because you are such a vibrant sweet and loving soul. There are few souls as you in this cold old world. WE NEED YOU we truly do (((((Hug’s)))))) Now remember in my other incarnation I’m a witch, so I’m sending you a little spell to lift your soul once more. By the light of the moon as if floats so high Keep this gentle soul alive don’t let it die By the light of the stars count them one by one This is a dream of delight and its only just begun Continue to fly high Noah darling boy you are a fabulous writer and a fantastic human soul. Love and light to you dear one    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Don't go quietly  keep writing because here you'll never be lonely. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Noah, although my time at passions is scattered,...I always look forward to your radiance, your posts and replies, which spread such warmth and hope. If this is indeed about you, please know that you are not alone. Well written, succint write. *Peace you. And thank YOU for sharing. |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Where do you wanna go, dear friend? You still have your duties to attend... I do want to see your words of commend No matter how I have penned; So, please be here to spread the cheer... With kind words that you ALWAYS send.... hugs, amigo |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sweet Poet!! Going where? You aren't going anywhere....we will track you down and tickle you with our plumed pens!! Take heart dear one. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, If I were you I'd kick up a fuss. Please stay |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"Above all, Have Fun!" Noah, see this? It's written in the guidelines. Take a deep breath, don't be so hard on yourself. I love you and others love you, you are a treasure, an angel ok? Do you enjoy writing? Your writing is beautiful. Everyone here loves you. It's a busy place, you know? Lots of people. It's like a wheel churning. You know someone told me recently they didn't receive many replies. Well, I thought....I can understand wanting to be read, heard, loved. But is that why we are here? Is that why we are really here? Is is about a number? A number on the screen. Is that how we value our self-worth! Oh, God, I hope not. Many times I read a poem and I want to reply but I am afraid it will be misunderstood so I do not. I hate that feeling. It takes away a person's freedom and denies the very reason for the forum. But sometimes you have to do that instead of saying the wrong thing or having it taken the wrong way. Honey, it's not about numbers, it's about words. Math cannot equal the English language in emotion, love and depth. No way. It's not about a long thread, it's about a patchwork of people who have come together to make one glorious quilt....if that's not true, then we are all wasting our time. I love you, Noah. Keep writing and be gentle with yourself.  Kathleen--(Kay) |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Noah,my dear sweet friend you can`t go anywhere I would miss you so much.    Juanita |
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OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
keep on hangin and bangin amigo...nothing is so bad that you can't be badder. you are the uplifter here..it is not acceptable for you to leave without two years notice and a forwarding address. OWG |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Noah, Your not going anywhere.Your staying right here with us until all this sadnees is out of you.Write it out adn let it go.We love you and want you to stay. peaches |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Noah, you are loved. |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Noah!!!! This is sooo sad and lonely! You are such a warm and sweet person, we all love you! Keep that in mind and look to the horizon for tomorrow always has something new and wonderful to cherish!!! Love, Bonnie |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Noah, This is such a heartrending poem. Well done, spare, and quiet. Very good one. Nan |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Dear Noah, You are breaking my heart. There is so much said in this short poem. I do hope you are ok, and NO DONT GO.This is sad, we love you. floria |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
Whenever I see your cheerful, encouraging posts, I think to myself..here is a true demonstration of kindness. I think its great! Its not always easy to keep your face to the sun, but you do it so well, I'd hate to see you give up. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Noah hope is something you need to keep doing even if you don't feel like it...James |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
So would the shine in my sun...dear poet..you know..I know..I would miss your big warm hugs. I'm here even when you think I'm not. Always, Regina |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Noah! Who upset you so much? Please don't go. I would really miss you. We would all miss you. You are a very sweet and kind person. We all love you. And, look forward to reading you poetry and replies. So, please don't go. Stay here with us. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Noah, I have never been one to go quietly... This is beautifully written as is all of your work. You have such a warm heart and kind spirit. Thank you for being a part of PIP. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Yes Noah,...thank you for being a part of PIP. *Peace. |
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