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Open Poetry #18

Rock Candy

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-01-16 11:18 PM

Rock Candy

he sends
me surprises
in the bottom
of a box
of candy
a sweet
blue rock
a small piece
of himself
and I hold
his heart
in my hand

"I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow)

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

1 posted 2002-01-16 11:23 PM

That's very thoughtful. A beautiful poem about a wonderful guy! Thanks!

-Silver Streak

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

poetryinmotion
Member

since 2002-01-14

Posts 61
mass

2 posted 2002-01-16 11:29 PM

what a wonderful poem. i liked reading this very much. had a nice romantic side to it. great job. love Alice

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-17 09:42 AM

(sigh) Ooohhhhhh...I love it, I love it, sweet friend, this is such a beautiful poem of suprises of true love! (smiles) Sooooooo cute, sweet friend, may he forever make your heart happy with his love and sweetness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

OWG
Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 155
California

4 posted 2002-01-17 09:59 AM

simple love stuff....the best kind..n-joyed it

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