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Swi...sh, swi...sh
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Swi...sh, swi...sh |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA 
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Swi..sh,… swi..sh "The rain came down, the streams rose, and the winds blew and beat against that house; yet it did not fall, because it had its foundation on the rock." NIV Matthew 7:25 Swi..sh…, swi..sh…, swi..sh…, swi..sh, swi..sh The rain is falling on my window shield Swi..sh…, swi..sh…, swi..sh…, swi..sh, swi..sh It's dark! Can hardly see the cars to yield. Swi..sh…, swi..sh…, swi..sh…, swi..sh, swi..sh And so I'm watching very carefully Swi..sh…, swi..sh…, swi..sh…, swi..sh, swi..sh Praying to God, Dear Lord, take care of me. Swi..sh…, swi..sh…, swi..sh…, swi..sh, swi..sh You know I try to follow you in love Swi..sh…, swi..sh…, swi..sh…, swi..sh, swi..sh But so much rain is falling from above. Swi..sh…, swi..sh…, swi..sh…, swi..sh, swi..sh Please clear my skies and give me some sunshine Swi..sh…, swi..sh…, swi..sh…, swi..sh, swi..sh So I can drive a little safer down the line. Swi..sh…, swi..sh…, swi..sh…, swi..sh, swi..sh Help me to steer a straight and narrow way Swi..sh…, swi..sh…, swi..sh…, swi..sh, swi..sh Regardless of the rain now in my day. Swi..sh, swi..sh Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida January 16, 2000 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (01-16-2002 09:41 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
On every life a little rain must fall...with God's help we will wade safely through it...BRAVO!!! I love the words that came to mind as I was reading this poem. Thank you. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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poetryinmotion Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 61mass |
hi bro. this is a very cute poem. i like it when you do different types of poetry. nice work. love sis |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Startime. Hugs back to you.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Alice. Yes, sis, as you well know, I do like to try different things. I like to play in the sand and make little thingies. Love you, -bro Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! (smiles) Yes, there will always be storms that may keep us under the weather, but as long as we hold faith true and believe in ourselves, we will weather every storm as He guides us with His loving hand! (big hugggssss) I love it, sweet friend, I love the onomatopoeia you use in this, it makes it really sound the rain is falling! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Noah, for your loving thoughts. Glad you liked the onomatopoeia effect. God bless you, sweet friend. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
You made me feel like i was driving in the rain..with that swish affect..enjoyed your words too Newell. ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I enjoyed this very much. peaches |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Victoria. Glad you felt the little shower. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, peaches. Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Sw...ished right in to say, atta boy! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Finally! Got some Sunshine! Thanks! -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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