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walker
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0 posted 2002-01-16 09:15 PM



Sometimes
we say more than
what other's need to hear
That's why
my darling
I only have one thing to say
"I love you"
it's a simple phrase
but it comes straight
from my heart
Never mind the world
for tonight
it feels right
the moon it's out
the light's are dimmed
you and me
alone and nothing
to distract us from
the one thing that must be said
"I love you"
again

[This message has been edited by walker (01-16-2002 09:16 PM).]

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-01-16 09:19 PM


walker~sometimes that is all that needs to be said.....the most important words of all !
Well done and thoroughly enjoyed.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

RosePetal
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2 posted 2002-01-16 09:22 PM


I love you is such a special phrase! I once said it to someone when I really didn't mean it and wound up hurting them later on, now I will save that phrase for someone whom I truly Love!

RP

Startime
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3 posted 2002-01-16 09:38 PM


*sigh* oh gosh...I wish I had someone to say those words too...and he better not get tired of it because he would hear it all the time. **big hugs**Lucky you...lucky man.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sven
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4 posted 2002-01-16 10:26 PM


it's something that no one tires of hearing. . .

well spoken walker. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-01-17 12:18 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, I love those words so much too, I dream of saying them face-to-face with my dream girl rose! (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Duncan
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6 posted 2002-01-17 03:47 AM


Thanks for cutting to the core, walker.  Whether you intended to...or not.  Maybe you're right.
Tracey
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7 posted 2002-01-17 06:53 AM


Yes, it is maybe a simple phrase, but it carries so much meaning and emotion. I like the way you penned this Walker

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

vandana
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8 posted 2002-01-17 10:35 AM


liked it
peaches73533
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9 posted 2002-01-17 11:35 AM


And those three simple words mean so much.Nicely done.
peaches

Bill Charles
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10 posted 2002-01-17 11:57 AM


walker - a lovely way to say those three special words...

BC

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