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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-01-16 07:51 PM






Something More
By: Noah Eaton
1/16/02

My vase is vague of flowers
The garden I see in my heart is incomplete
It’s all lonely now
My hopes are extenuated out
I could sure use a hug…

I tried to climb the rainbow
Take a peek if there’d be any love for me
It could’ve been anyone
I’ve lost my place in the sun
I could sure use a hug…

I want to love you so dearly
Make your dreams become reality
I just want us both to be happy
You are my love so heavenly…

And as time slips me by
I feel my hopes subside
But I don’t want to search for something more
And after all this time
I’ve made up my mind
I can’t bear to search for something more…

You are all my heart desires
You light my heart with your velvet fire
If I had just one wish
I would hold you close and share your kiss
I could sure use a hug…

And as time slips me by
I feel my hopes subside
But I don’t want to search for something more
And after all this time
I’ve made up my mind
I can’t bear to search for something more…
I want to love you…
I want you…
I want you so much…

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-16-2002 07:51 PM).]

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strbbux
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1 posted 2002-01-16 07:52 PM


Dear Noah, I hope she comes soon to give you a hug, in the meantime ((((hugs)))) floria
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2 posted 2002-01-16 07:56 PM


Oh Noah, how I have felt this same way..you know I have.
Sending big HUGGS.
Sandra

ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 2002-01-16 08:10 PM


Dear Noah; My friend, you have a most wonderful loving heart and so I believe that love will be returned, in God's own time...do not despair...(((HUGS))) (((NOAH)))  Love, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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4 posted 2002-01-16 08:13 PM


((((Huggsssss))) I know just how you feel, There are days when I feel unhappy and days when I feel on top of the world. You are a caring, loveable guy so don't ever change for anyone!

RP

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5 posted 2002-01-16 08:17 PM


this is a special poem, Noah, right
from your heart.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2002-01-16 08:35 PM


Noah - your writings have been sad lately my friend. I send a smile to you, and remember you are a very good person with a very warm heart....

BC

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7 posted 2002-01-16 08:39 PM


***big hugs***My heart goes out to you dear one. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2002-01-16 08:42 PM


Oh Noah sweetie...you sound so sad!
(((HUGS))) from me to you! (((HUGS)))
Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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