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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-01-16 07:47 PM



Freeing Depth


place your heart
inside my hands
let me breathe
your breath
a surface
we have touched
I want to know
your depth
let me into you
much deeper
places no one else
is allowed to know
I could soar along
with your spirit
oh, wont you
let me go
to caress
another’s soul
is embracing
a total being
knowing another inside
most special kind
of freeing


"I have already paid for all my future sins."  Sade...(King of Sorrow)

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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1 posted 2002-01-16 07:53 PM


OKAY - ALL RIGHT ALREADY - I'm yours!!  (have been for a long time - you just never looked).

Really liked this, in case you're wondering...


jwesley

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Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-01-16 08:01 PM




(sigh) Soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever melt with his heart and feel true happiness forever! (smiles) Love is the most beautiful freedom of all, we all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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3 posted 2002-01-16 08:07 PM


*sigh* love taken to the deepest of depths it can go...now that is where love wants to be the most. Absolutely beautiful. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2002-01-16 08:09 PM


Isn't it amazing how we really DO trust our hearts to those
we love?  This had such a warm, offering to it, Helen, very soft
and tender write.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2002-01-16 08:30 PM


helen - your very romantic you know, as this writing shows...

BC

catalinamoon
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6 posted 2002-01-17 10:31 AM


This is wonderful, Helen. I agree that nothing could be better.
Sandra

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04
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OK, USA
7 posted 2002-01-17 11:38 AM


This is the deepest our hearts and love will go.We all long for this.You are a great writer.
Peaches

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