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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-01-16 06:14 PM


You are to me
all that can be
all that ever will
beyond compare

You are to me
the roses in bloom
the breeze over water
my light

You will remain
tenderly in my heart
a part of my soul
my life

The stars
brilliantly shine
pure from your eyes
each night

You are
all things good
my life, my love
my being

I will
kiss you softly
hold you tightly
make us one
eternal

I
love
only
you

© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-16 06:29 PM


This is just beautiful, Barry. Wish there were a better word.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2002-01-16 06:34 PM


Barry - don't know what to say, except you are the master at writing these tender romantic ones...

BC

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3 posted 2002-01-16 06:38 PM


Now this is how to tell a woman that you love her!  So well done, Magnus.
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4 posted 2002-01-16 07:07 PM


Thank you Kay...just in that zone right now..

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5 posted 2002-01-16 07:08 PM


Bill,  from you...I consider that a very
nice complement...

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6 posted 2002-01-16 07:09 PM


Thanx Duncan...yep,  I guess I could frame
this one...and let her read it every day...

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7 posted 2002-01-16 07:11 PM




(sigh) Again your lovely romantic words amaze me, sweet friend, you truly are a King Of Romance! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, may you forever shower her with these lovely words! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus
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8 posted 2002-01-16 07:14 PM


Thank You Noah...pleased that you enjoyed...
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9 posted 2002-01-16 08:05 PM


*sigh* sweet tender romance....that is what you are known best for...Softly this one gives a smile. Well done, my friend. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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10 posted 2002-01-16 08:18 PM


Karen...you know I always enjoy your words.
They have never waivered since the first
day you found me at another poetry site and
have helped my creativity so greatly...

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11 posted 2002-01-16 08:20 PM


hi Mugnus. what a beautiful love poem. very tender and very sweet. i loved this poem very much. i can tell you are a romantic. with a heart of gold. love Alice
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12 posted 2002-01-16 09:20 PM


A true love poem
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13 posted 2002-01-16 09:23 PM


Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A gorgeous love poem...another one from the Master of Love Poems

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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14 posted 2002-01-16 09:23 PM


....Oooooh SIGH!!!......

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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15 posted 2002-01-16 09:31 PM


Magnus~
Know what I like BEST about your poetry ????
The sincerity ... the complete sincerity~

'You are
all things good
my life, my love
my being'


Beautiful~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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16 posted 2002-01-16 10:05 PM


Barry,

what a lucky girl....

Magnus
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17 posted 2002-01-16 10:14 PM


Alice...thanx much...happy that you liked this poem....nice meeting you..
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18 posted 2002-01-16 10:15 PM


Walker...as always, thank you for your kindness..
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19 posted 2002-01-16 10:16 PM


Lyra, wow!!!  Love the frog...thanx...
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20 posted 2002-01-16 10:17 PM


Thanx Nancy,  at least it was a big sigh!!!
Magnus
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21 posted 2002-01-16 10:17 PM


Marge....pleased...much...that yu liked this.
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22 posted 2002-01-16 10:18 PM


WhispersCaress....Nope...lucky man...thanx..
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23 posted 2002-01-17 11:23 AM


loved it
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24 posted 2002-01-17 11:52 AM


You always wow me with your words.You are the master of romance.
Peaches

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25 posted 2002-01-17 01:49 PM


The way love should always feel....


Lauren~


Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-17-2002 01:49 PM).]

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